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Suzerain of Sheol
Desolation Denizen
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I do prefer that one, the imagery seems to resonate more powerfully and I overall like the flow of it better.
I notice you're rather fond of the word ashes. :p I think every poet has words like that that show up over and over again in their work. (Not sure I can get through a poem, myself, without using the word "God" in some fashion...) It's interesting too juxtapose the different usages, I find.
Cold silence has a tendency
to atrophy any sense of compassion
between supposed lovers.
Between supposed brothers.
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Posted 01-24-2012, 06:57 PM
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