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Quiet Man Cometh
We're all mad here.
Death's Footman
Dressed in feathers and black tar
High-collared grandeur
But dour
Around fine red
A bloodless head
A thin skin shroud over skull
Long hanging down
With patient weight
MH
Well...now that I type that out I'm not too happy with it. Need to add some things.
And then there is this one:
"Blue Flowers"
By the train tracks
Reminds me
Of another
Derailed train; a corpse
Iced over in torpor.
And the flowers lift
The rail car
In their own time,
The flowers that grow
By the ragged roadside
A constant everywhere.
MH
That last line needs work. Not sure how to work out "everywhere" as a noun, or noun-sort-of-thing...thing.
Tea?
Posted 07-21-2016, 03:22 AM