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Asami's poetry AND trisphee parodies!
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Quiet Man Cometh
We're all mad here.
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"Like a Puppet" is definately creepy, though some of the rhyming does feel a bit forced and doesn't flow as well as it could in my opinion. The poem that stuck out most to me so far is "My Last Breath," the last two lines in the first part particular. I do like the short stanza pattern in the second part. :)
Tea?
Posted 01-17-2012, 09:27 PM