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Suzerain of Sheol Suzerain of Sheol is offline
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Originally Posted by Quiet Man Cometh View Post
As I seem to notice, your poems are a slog to the mind until hitting the last few lines.

I get some of the references but I'm not always sure of the context. Either I don't understand them enough, or you are mixing metaphors and I am unfamiliar with one side.
But I tried so hard to make it simpler and more approachable. :(
Cold silence has a tendency
to atrophy any sense of compassion
between supposed lovers.
Between supposed brothers.
Old Posted 07-21-2018, 02:52 AM Reply With Quote