[bluebird]

it's a great start tho! i already got the feel u were going 4 sth dynamic with that karate stance. maybe add some smoke near his feet and specks of debris in the foreground if u want to work w/ what u have.
if u don't mind some erasing n redrawing, maybe u could foreshorten the leg holding most of his weight. i'd draw redlines but idk how u feel about that.

!!! i can totally vibe w/ CRT. it sounds cooler and befitting!