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Default   #306   Gallagher Gallagher is offline
It Won't Stop
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Originally Posted by Suzerain of Sheol View Post
here and then gone
disintegrated carbon stirred by divine wind
the form and void of a nesting doll
the flayed skin of better philsophers peeling away
this is my favorite part of this one.

something about the imagery for this one just clicked in my brain in a good way and also i relate to literally being a living emptiness that only exists in tangible form thanks to a carefully crafted layered cake of lies and self-delusions


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Originally Posted by Suzerain of Sheol View Post
a sphere crushed by failing imagination
thoughts like love and murder boiled into tedious dreams
every version of oneself cramped in a single brain
this bit is also good and literally me







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