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Default   #38   Suzerain of Sheol Suzerain of Sheol is offline
Desolation Denizen
Form follows function. >_<

Every line being capitalized is an eyesore to me, it ejects me right out of the poem. It's like seeing a random capital letter mid-sentence. Which, granted, is actually within a poet's purview if it serves some purpose, but that's completely beside the point.

Anyway, I assure you, the lack of capitalization is entirely willful, intentional, and considered on my part. I have precious little respect for formal poetry, anyway.
Cold silence has a tendency
to atrophy any sense of compassion
between supposed lovers.
Between supposed brothers.
Old Posted 09-06-2011, 09:09 PM Reply With Quote