Arsis_von_Neaera
THIS. IS. SPAR -shot- ... *gurgle*
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Hmm, the rhythm is nice. I like where its going. The question really is does she overcome or does she falter next? She's either going downward or upward, which way does she go?
Try the word 'dismay'.
Maybe it's a condition, ever think of that? No, no you didn't. You never thought, "oh maybe he's sensitive about his invisible eyes." Maybe it's a skin condition.
"Maybe she was born with it..."
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Posted 01-27-2012, 08:17 PM
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