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Asami's poetry AND trisphee parodies!
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Kit Katy
Ho! Miscreant!
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Out of the set you've posted, I think that
The Lonely Girl
and
Like a Puppet
are your strongest poems. These stuck out because of the clear images and organized text. Both are depressing, but also memorable and my favorites.
~ You can dance if you want too,
You can leave your friends behind.
Because if they don't dance,
Then they're no friends of mine ~
Posted 01-13-2012, 11:14 PM