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Kasolyna Kasolyna is offline
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I'll be posting scenes, hopefully chronologically for the most part, from a novel I've been working on. It originated from an in-class assignment that lasted about one page. Made it's way into a short story and now it's being reborn and pushing it's way through as a novel. I tried doing NaNoWriMo with it last November but classes (I'm a frosh in college atm) got in the way. So now I'm looking for feedback, enthusiasm, criticism, and spell/grammar checks if anyone is so kindly obliged.

This is a story about a boy who works in a store that sells emotions. You need a prescription to buy most of them, and Danny Boy is curious about them. With the help of Blue Eyes, the daughter of a user, he might just find out why people need to drink emotions and why some things might be better left alone.

I hope you all enjoy what I have and bug me if I'm not posting too much (except during finals, please forgive in that case.)
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Old Posted 03-02-2012, 08:11 PM Reply With Quote