Suzerain of Sheol
Desolation Denizen
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#29
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Personally, I think you should just go all-in with how you'd like to do it, and see how beta readers react. You can always dial it back if it seems like a consistent complaint, but there's every chance you'll pull it off. :)
...or you can be like me and ignore what they say!
Cold silence has a tendency
to atrophy any sense of compassion
between supposed lovers.
Between supposed brothers.
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Posted 04-20-2017, 02:13 AM
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