View Single Post
Default   #6   Xyphlan Xyphlan is offline
Lazy
I suppose that the message of "Immortality" is that a poem has to have some kind of meaning. You could arrange a bunch of words into a couple lines of iambic pentamenter, and call it a poem, but it wouldn't be very good. Though that is the extreme case. There certainly is value in rhythm itself, which was the theme of the previous poem.
In all likelihood, you just read a clunky wall of text. There's no need for me to make you read even more in my signature.
Old Posted 02-27-2013, 02:24 AM Reply With Quote