[Quiet Man Cometh]

Rin, I'm not faulting you, and I can see that your English is very good. I did have some comments about that but I will leave those aside.

If you are going to share your writing publicly, and ask for opinions, you have to be prepared for a variety of responses, some of which you will probably not like. I don't think any author gets through a patch of writing without bruises. It's your choice to share or not, but be aware that there will be negative replies and you have to decide what to take from them.