[Serra Britt]

At the very least I think all the story parts need to be copied (not moved, as they should also be found in their respective spots) to one forum so they can all be found and read by people who want to read them. And then, after that, they should be edited so that they are easier to read. I like having a background story to the events, because that's the way I am, but unless you get to read it when it happens I think the current story is too jumbled and hashed together to read after the fact. The intro for Nox Nocturnalis was pretty good, since it was written like a story, and I think all the stuff that has been done should be rewritten as such.