[Daring Scylla]

hok
lets do this
first off, good things: I like the concept. composition is pretty decent - there's not a ton of white space or clutter or garbage ruining. colors contrast fairly well though i'd definitely put more darks in teh sheets/pillow
the bad: something about his face is off, i think it's the eye closest to us and the ear is a bit too far forward. the eyebrows bother me too, they seem too small and close together. the right hand facing us looks awkward and should probably be given a little more depth and the pillows its on need to squish more
moving on the the hair the way it drapes over his body gets weird, like when its falling over his shoulder it seems like there should be more hair up top to constitute the amount falling from his arm
right ankle, one closest to us should prolly be thinner, and slope the leg a bit more.
face, you might want to make the chin a bit stronger depending on what you're going for but the way the chin is now is fine too
haha i hope that helps, sometimes i'm pretty useless when it comes to critiquing