[Espy]

That's not bad, Dark. If you had more space on the paper (looks like you reached the edge), I would said to pull the hips and waist down a bit more because right now, her ribcage stops at the bottom of the breasts.

Shoulder width is still too large for torso width, but you're getting better.

Last bit: This is probably going way too deeply into anatomy and structure, but imagine that the angel wings are shaped to your arm. the drawing is missing the whole "upper arm" portion of the wing, but that...technicalities. Unless you really want me to go on about that XD