[Illusion]

Let me just list what I read so far.

Things suggested"
- Speed up the story so interest isn't lost. (I agree 100% btw)
- Character bios so we can keep track.
- Limit the amount of NPC's (Is it possible to make this mandatory? xD This is my biggest pet-peeve about Trisphee personally.)
- Add a Synopsis (A life saver for me)
- Keep NPC's that are popular? (Kamid back, yes?)