[Illusion]

I agree completely, I just lose track in the story. There's far to much writing, it would be nice to have a quick round up thread explaining everything that happened in the event when it ends. "This happened, that happened, and now this is happening."

And.. LESS NEW NPC'S. Seriously I can't keep track anymore, try and limit your NPC's man.. It's ok to have a new one every once and a while but like 24 for one event? Geez.. Isn't the goal for writing a book is to slowly introduce characters while telling the great story. And then slowly add characters as the story develops so you don't overload the reader?

Edit:
@DK
Then why did we need new NPC's? x.x... If it was up to me I would be throwing mallets at the writing staff right now.