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Quiet Man Cometh · Posted 10-25-2011, 02:06 AM

I've been told my writing is too detailed, so it's hard to judge. I guess it's more a trick of which details to put in. Leave out certain things and it can feel bland, put in too many superfulous things and it can feel chunky.

Quiet Man Cometh We're all mad here.			#18633
	I've been told my writing is too detailed, so it's hard to judge. I guess it's more a trick of which details to put in. Leave out certain things and it can feel bland, put in too many superfulous things and it can feel chunky. Tea?
		Posted 10-25-2011, 02:06 AM