[Quiet Man Cometh]

I quite like that one. Normally your stuff tends to be a little obscure to me. One read through was enough to get the impact I think. Good job. :)

The only reservation I have is the line "when the grass reclaims the carnage" because grass is a very persistant thing, especially to people who weed gardens with neat borders (;)) so it doesn't seem to fit with the rest of the imagery there. I suppose then that it's one word rather than the line itself. :)