[DarkForbidden-Love]

Since i have been frequating the poems threads and commenting on them I have decided to re-enter the world of poetry. Beware Oh, world. It opens imediatly for critique.

Fading Vision

I used to see the colors,
The silvers, the purples, and the blues,
But then I grew up,
And my world faded,
I'm left with grays,
In a world that should be full of color,
My eyes grow uninterested,
And I walk away,
From this grey world.

Garden of Roses

When I was born the garden was full of white roses,
As I grew they changed,
In my childhood they were yellow and blue,
In my preteen years they were pink and purple,
The teen years they were red and gray,
Then they all turned grey and the world faded from view,
I noticed every day that they seemed to be darker than before,
Today they are black,
As they lay on a lonely grave.

Now start telling me if ya like it or not.