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Default   #80   Quiet Man Cometh Quiet Man Cometh is offline
We're all mad here.
I like it, but you're right, there's some glitchyness about the middle, I'd say at the end of the fourth stanza. There are bits and pieces that I think could be editted out, and it's more those pieces that are causing the issues I think, rather than anying important being missing. I feel the poem is all there but has some loose threads that need trimming. :)

And being someone who often edits her poems three or four times over, writing evry rendition down, I say have at it. :D
Old Posted 09-27-2011, 08:48 PM Reply With Quote