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Default   #56   DarkForbidden-Love DarkForbidden-Love is offline
Person, what Person?
I'm agreeing with that statement.

You have never heard of the 'you' rule? I'm majoring in theatre and I've heard of it. This might be because I keep all my notes and every day in 6th through 9th grade it was the same basic grammar rules for formal writing:
1)Grammar (Caps/puncuation/verb tenses)
2) No slang
3)Word Choice
4) No contractions
5) Do not start a sentance with then, well, and
6)Do not use you
7)Do not use the same adjectives in the same paragraphs
8) Indent
9) Never use alot
10) Also never use 'in my opinion' or 'I think'

I occasionally scrap number 1 though. I start writing in past tense, shift to present tense, and end in futer tense. One of my Literature teachers loved it the others have hated it.
Puppy to Asami
Gallagher is Nursy~
Broken Muse is my girlfriend
And Ducky is awesome!

Quote:
That is the general nature of things! An equality, a mutal need!

What? To kill and be killed? To love and to feed? That is what you support! There is no equality between the pet and the master.
-Elizabeth & Jason (From The Thirteenth Season)
Old Posted 09-08-2011, 09:08 PM Reply With Quote