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What do you think about Trisphee's Story?
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Jurinjo
Poconut Overlord
Feel what way? An attachment to characters? I honestly do like characters particularly how they evolve, their decisions and thoughts. Strange though that in stories I tend to actually focus on the series of events leading up to the climax. But I think I'm getting distracted.
My complain is in the story telling. Personally, I think it would be easier to get into the story if it wasn't written like an epic narration.
Posted 08-13-2011, 04:08 PM