[Illusion]

This is a question that's been on my mind since the taskal wars, what do you think about the overall story? What do you think about the writing style? Do you think it's interesting? Any criticism you'd like to address?

Personally I have a on and off relationship with the story, it's like Lord of the Rings meet Star wars. It just doesn't work, but I will admit the story has those moments that are interesting. But I think it's sad that I read the story 3 times now, and I will get lost in confusion reading the taskal wars. The story looks like something role-players wrote, and remembering characters and or caring for them is hard. We need more definite characters and more ways to define them. The only definite character I know we have is Pandora and that's only because she's been on the header since forever.