[Lucid:]

Az, yours is nice but I just think it needs more color. I'm not a fan of avatars that are one color with maybe a few accents of another color. I never make those kinds on other sites, and here, when I use one color, I use different shades of the color to break it up. I personally think a white/silver/gold avi is really hard to make look good, especially if you don't have a ton of items.