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Fey · Posted 08-08-2011, 11:14 AM

LOL okay, new critique for the beast then...
I really like the overall composition of this version, though I'm still feeling like if you want the focus to be on the tattoos you've got a lot going on around them. That being said, I don't think this is 'missing out' on that not being the focus, I personally think if you add the details to the scarf bit it'll be awesome-sauce!

Onto the fishie!
I think the adjustments for the hips were PERFECT it now looks very floaty/relaxed and once you add in the main tailfin bits I think it'll balance out nicely! Whether you were going for it or not I get a very 'infinity' feel to the composition.

wow...longer bit there...eh he he

Fey gnometastic			#323
	LOL okay, new critique for the beast then... I really like the overall composition of this version, though I'm still feeling like if you want the focus to be on the tattoos you've got a lot going on around them. That being said, I don't think this is 'missing out' on that not being the focus, I personally think if you add the details to the scarf bit it'll be awesome-sauce! Onto the fishie! I think the adjustments for the hips were PERFECT it now looks very floaty/relaxed and once you add in the main tailfin bits I think it'll balance out nicely! Whether you were going for it or not I get a very 'infinity' feel to the composition. wow...longer bit there...eh he he I've gone to look for myself, if I should return before I get back keep me here. __________________________________________ \|What is your Quest?\| Nikko was here out of love for Fey. <3 beautiful art by littl3chocobo
		Posted 08-08-2011, 11:14 AM