[Suzerain of Sheol]

I think you misunderstood what I said, I was complaining about what I see people normally do when making threads for their writing on sites. Your opening post was very clear and got my attention.

I'm going to take a look now. :)

Edit: Actually, before I get going, I need to know if this is polished up or just a draft. I tend to want to point out every little grammar tic, but if you already know they need fixing, I won't waste both of our time.