[gremlin]

Anything, if you think something can be improved or needs to be fixed up or if you think that something is weak, then tell me. Don't be afraid to hurt my feelings or anything. I'm a writer. I have to get my work approved somehow, it's going to be looked at eventually.
I'm not going to ignore your comments. The only reason I won't post is because it would be a triple post or because I'm not online.