[Suzerain of Sheol]

I can read this for you and give feedback -- just not tonight, I have a horrible headache.

I appreciate you putting that disclaimer in, though. I actually wouldn't have volunteered, otherwise. I don't like wasting time reading over something if the person is just going to ignore my comments. I also like knowing which elements you'd like specific feedback on, so you're two-for-two. :)

I'll likely be able to get to it tomorrow.