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After some long procrastination I decided to write the first chapter of my story that takes place during a zombie apocalypse. It isn't finished yet. I decided to take the second chapter and put it in with the first... but then decided the ending of it was too weak and I want to re-do it. I was hoping to get some opinions. I can take criticism. Don't sugar-coat anything, I can handle it. I would prefer to know how to improve it then rather be lied to that it's perfectly fine. If you see any spelling mistakes, etc. Point them out, please. Also if you have any suggestions as to what could happen next, suggest them! I'm a little stumped right now. - shot -




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Old Posted 07-27-2011, 10:10 PM Reply With Quote