[Illusion]

(Much better in comparison to the last thing you wrote xD. Your still squishing but not at a huge extent. The only thing I want to point out is when you said "Like her jock personality" Don't be saying like this personality, because the person reading doesn't know what this personality is because you haven't introduce it yet. So in short don't mention something that hasn't been introduce yet unless it serves for plot later.)

Across the field a young boy wearing a middle school uniform is staring at Malia through Binoculars. Amongst him was a taller, extremely skinny kid wearing glasses.
"Woah, woah woah. She's new, how many hot girls are coming to this school anyway?" The smaller boy said. "Man when I finish school, I'm going there!"
"HEY HEY! NO FAIR! LET ME LOOK!" The taller boy said snatching the binoculars from the smaller boy. "WOAH! Man! I wonder what color are her panties!"
"You idiot! Girls like her don't wear any!"
"Whaat!? No way!"
"So true! They are born hookers!"
"Hey what are you two doing!?" A women said, she was dressed with a long black skirt, and white riffled top. She had short red hair that goes down to her neck, and wore thin black glasses.
"Crap it's Ms. Heartveil!" The boys said at the same time.
"Jimmy, Timothy.. IS THAT YOU? WHY ARE YOU HEADING TO CLASS?" Ms. Heartveil then grabs the boys by the ears and then walks off dragging the boys. "You two aren't missing class again to be looking at Niamoria High School girls again?"
"WERE SORRY!" Both boys said at the time.

(Haha.. I just wrote you some admirers xDD )