Suzerain of Sheol
Desolation Denizen
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This was my personal favorite out of the three. I really like the the almost wistful tone of the piece. I have to say, though, the third paragraph is kind of weak to me. It just falls a little flat when I read it. And sounds a bit too affected.
Cold silence has a tendency
to atrophy any sense of compassion
between supposed lovers.
Between supposed brothers.
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Posted 06-29-2011, 12:16 AM
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