[Quiet Man Cometh]

I like the idea. There are a couple spots that I don't quite understand. One is where you describe the world as exciting, which it doesn't seem to be. With the general appearance of a "paradise" and a swing set it feels more subdued or relaxed than exciting to me. The other is at the end when you talk about relief washing over your "depression." Not sure where the depression is specifically coming from, or if it's a typical mood for the character, to it feels disjointed.

You are going to continue with the colour world ideas in general, or from this story with Prosy continuing to appear? I'm curious to see what you do with what colours and why.

One more thing, if you put the assignment details at the top it might make the piece more attractive to readers. Right now it doesn't seem to draw much attention to itself. Just a thought. :)

Cheers.