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Kyp · Posted 06-16-2011, 11:26 PM

The end is very well written and I can picture it very well. But the beginning needs a little more description of what he looks like or who he is.

Very nice small piece

Kyp MWAHAHAHAHA!			#5
	The end is very well written and I can picture it very well. But the beginning needs a little more description of what he looks like or who he is. Very nice small piece
		Posted 06-16-2011, 11:26 PM