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Serra Britt · Posted 06-12-2011, 08:44 PM

Well, I can see the Advent Children influence just like you said Quiet. It was a very fast read. I can see the condensing you mentioned too, there are a few spots where it feels rushed and disorganized.

And I have to say I giggled a bit when I saw the name Melania. This was written before I ever used the name Melonia in some online games but the similarity just made me giggle :3

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Well, I can see the Advent Children influence just like you said Quiet. It was a very fast read. I can see the condensing you mentioned too, there are a few spots where it feels rushed and disorganized. And I have to say I giggled a bit when I saw the name Melania. This was written before I ever used the name Melonia in some online games but the similarity just made me giggle :3 ♥ Never be afraid to be yourself ♥ Want to see my art or webcomic? Serra's Art Gallery A Neko's Quest \| My Closet Kitsune's Haven Image courtesty of tsukiko
	Posted 06-12-2011, 08:44 PM