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#52
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Suzerain of Sheol
Desolation Denizen
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One thing I worry about is now I'm so rebellious against traditional storytelling that I think I'm making my stories less accessible and too abstract to really draw a reader in.
That same story is now this sort of subdued, subtle, intricate character piece with a fantasy background. The plot is largely secondary to the interaction between the three main characters... like, there's a bigger epic fantasy sort of plot going on, but it takes a backseat to the relationship between these three guys as they come into personal conflict with each other. It comes across as kind of dense in the reading, I think.
Cold silence has a tendency
to atrophy any sense of compassion
between supposed lovers.
Between supposed brothers.
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Posted 06-02-2011, 07:59 PM
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