[Suzerain of Sheol]

Originally Posted by Lunaryon

What kind of story was your original draft?

Ah, heh, um... well, it was uh... fantasy, yeah, and, uh... generic, and cliche, and predictable, and full of Dei ex Machinae, with a one-dimensional villain, and two-dimensional characters at best, and um... *sweats* was pretty much written to show off how much I loved epic-level Dungeons and Dragons, and... yeah, you get the idea.

What amazes me is what I somehow managed to turn it into. The story I have outlined now is so far from... any of that it's staggering, especially since the plot isn't even that different. The only snag is that I can't seem to write it. :|