[CupcakeDolly]

Thanks for reading it through! <3

You were right in that Alex and Loli share a psychic connection. In addition, the main effect of Feel is higher levels of empathy in the user. I have a small prologue written that explores the drug a bit more through Loli's perspective, but I'm not happy with the way it's written. I'm still deciding whether to cut it to bits and put it back together, or change it entirely, or just leave it out.

I noticed the flow when I was reading back through it (I started writing that chapter a good year or so ago and barely finished it about two months back). I'm glad I had it up for somebody else to read, because I wasn't sure if it was just me being over-analytical. Like I said before, sometimes I put too much thought into writing, and it doesn't end up looking quite right. I'm going to go through and see if I can't simplify it.

I'm so glad you had some good things to say too~ It makes me want to keep going on with it, so thank you for that.