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#4
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Suzerain of Sheol
Desolation Denizen
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I've only just started reading, and it's late so I won't be able to give a real critique until tomorrow, but I just wanted to point out that you have something of a "voice" in your writing. That's good, I don't see it a lot in stuff I read online. It shows that you put some thought into what you're putting down on the page.
Cold silence has a tendency
to atrophy any sense of compassion
between supposed lovers.
Between supposed brothers.
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Posted 05-27-2011, 11:47 PM
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