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(Alright, sorry just the way you overused one word in a sentence then continue to switch off with a different word and use that more then you needed. It bothered me a lot...)

... It's a common sight... Bastion thought. A boy accidentally seeing a girl half naked... And dressed as a guy.
"Uh......"
Bastion stared blankly at Malia with a stare.

Last edited by Illusion; 05-26-2011 at 09:51 PM.
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