Suzerain of Sheol
Desolation Denizen
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Oh, I just finished a similar class, myself. Didn't learn a thing, but at least it gave me some practice.
And, yeah, the biggest thing to work on is working emotion into the story -- as in, making the audience feel something for the characters. Getting inside her head more will definitely help with that.
Cold silence has a tendency
to atrophy any sense of compassion
between supposed lovers.
Between supposed brothers.
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Posted 05-22-2011, 08:44 AM
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