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Default   #516   Fey Fey is offline
gnometastic
I actually loooooooove details, and her books got me super interested into studying prehistoric man(I seriously aced all my prehistory classes and had great debates with profs thanks to her stuff). I just had issues with the fact that this book felt so much more rushed/unedited. She was bringing up things every third chapter that wasn't really necessary, it was just rehashing information she'd already given us. A good example was she constantly brought up the definition of a 'fa'lodge'. And we're not talking a one sentence definition, sometimes up to three paragraphs. But she'd already reminded us(it was in the previous book) a couple other times in the same book. I can't help but feel her editor was just not reading by that point.
I've gone to look for myself, if I should return before I get back keep me here.
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Old Posted 04-07-2011, 09:22 PM Reply With Quote