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Pisces · Posted 03-08-2011, 10:03 PM

Pssht, of course you write okay! You write fabulous! And 171 words will go by so fast once you get the right direction. If you have ever the slightest idea of what to add, go for it. Also, a tip! You looked pretty good on it, but don't use contractions. "isn't" and "don't" can easily be double if broken. I think you already did that though, I don't see any.

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	Pssht, of course you write okay! You write fabulous! And 171 words will go by so fast once you get the right direction. If you have ever the slightest idea of what to add, go for it. Also, a tip! You looked pretty good on it, but don't use contractions. "isn't" and "don't" can easily be double if broken. I think you already did that though, I don't see any. A Fishy and .Rousi Quest Animal Lover? Come join us! Best people on earth can be found at the 10,000 Cat Paws Charity! Gogo super kinspowers flowers and fish react!
		Posted 03-08-2011, 10:03 PM