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Pisces · Posted 02-17-2011, 09:56 PM

I think it sounds wonderful! It's got a catchy and interesting opening right there to grab the reader's attention. It gets them ready for the rest of the paper without them wanting to fall asleep, AND tells the thesis statement in there seamlessly. Bravo indeed!

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I think it sounds wonderful! It's got a catchy and interesting opening right there to grab the reader's attention. It gets them ready for the rest of the paper without them wanting to fall asleep, AND tells the thesis statement in there seamlessly. Bravo indeed! A Fishy and .Rousi Quest Animal Lover? Come join us! Best people on earth can be found at the 10,000 Cat Paws Charity! Gogo super kinspowers flowers and fish react!
	Posted 02-17-2011, 09:56 PM