[Damies]

I love the fact that the plot is done as a written story rather than a comic personally... but I love reading like tons.

_____It might be wise to implement paragraph indents in them though, usually on forums I find out what the background color is and do a simple "invisible underscores" indent since indents don't function on forums like they do in word processing programs. See what I did thar? -points to start of this paragraph-

But that may just be me as a stickler for nice clean and easy to distinguish paragraph formats.