| Espy   Wanderer     |   |  | #275 |  | 
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      The last couple stanzas made me...uncomfortable.  ...I'm also having a weird semi-shitty day, so that might have contributed.  Agreeing w Quiet on the rhyme scheme.  It's a bit odd and sometimes feels forced.
 ....also the title might have made me giggle a bit, having gone to catholic high and all.
 
Step in front of a runaway train____Just to feel alive again
 â•â•â•â•â•â•â•?  ?•â•â•â•â•â•
 â•â•â•â•â•â•â•?  ?•â•â•â•â•â•Pushing forward through the night_____
 Aching chest and blurry sight
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|   | Posted 07-08-2017, 01:29 AM |   |  |