Thread: Suze Poetry
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The last couple stanzas made me...uncomfortable. ...I'm also having a weird semi-shitty day, so that might have contributed. Agreeing w Quiet on the rhyme scheme. It's a bit odd and sometimes feels forced.

....also the title might have made me giggle a bit, having gone to catholic high and all.
STONEWALL WAS A RIOT

Old Posted 07-08-2017, 01:29 AM Reply With Quote