[Quiet Man Cometh]

My manuscript is already organized into chapters so it's easy to keep going with it. I'm editing chapter by chapter in lumps. Pretty easy to follow. Not sure how well my commentary will fit in but we'll see. I've decided to pass the manuscript to my aunt to look over when I'm done for her input before I print anything. I think she would like to see it, and she's also not the type to pull her punches if she has an opinion on something. Since I refer to family members and friends who would be identifiable to other family reading the thing, I want to be sure I'm not doing anything that's going to rock the boat too much.