[Gallagher]

I don't know! I'm not good at suddenly changing thought trains, and I'm uploading items so that's exactly what I have to do, lol.

Well, the typos are distracting, and I find it hard to find any rhythm reading it. Also, the line "because you have always had win[d] inside you" suddenly makes the entire thing sound like it's about gas. The theme is nice though, and it definitely has some strong imagery.

Fulkth, flavored drinks are the best drinks!