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Default   #102   Lucid: Lucid: is offline
The ever amazing cap'n obvious
After reading the whole story discussion up to this point, my personal opinion is to delete the old story and go back to the original Trisiana plot, which was completely scrapped.

I liked that one because it was full of adventure and time travel. A merry party of adventurers who already have outfits made into items. What's not to like? :D

As far as presentation, I think Trisphee needs more non-plot events. There are two main reasons that events get delayed: Lack of items pixeled, or lack of story written. If we didn't have to rely on writers to make Sebastian ramble on about how excited he is, we could hold more fun events with a simple game and a couple items, or even just contests and currency handouts. One lore event per year would give the writers time to create a compelling story where the users feel like they the outcome affects them as a person (but of course not where they can affect the outcome).

I know I am one of the people who was turned off of the story due to sheer volume of reading to do. I tried hard to keep up with it, but just couldn't anymore after the Deivai chapters. Presenting the bulk of the story gradually over the course of an event and then having occasional mini-chapters (presented maybe as a single day's captain's log, a couple field sketches, a short video, there's a lot of possibilities here) throughout keeps it fresh and mixes up the presentation in an interesting and, most importantly, easy to consume way.


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Old Posted 02-03-2015, 03:38 AM Reply With Quote